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Darkened Treasures Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18nj |
I awoke this morning to a beautiful sight It was the passing of another night As I walked outside I looked to the east And let my eyes gaze upon a glorious beast After taking in all that I could I turned and wondered if I should For once I knew of an enlighten soul Who's heart shone like beuatiful gold Her honesty was much like that great ball of fire It it illuminated my heart as if built upon a pyre And as I was amazed by the beautiful sun rising I found it was here that my question lies in Should I call her again, for it has been some time Or instead wait for her to find this simple rhyme This hope I must tell you is not at all unrealistic Because her poems here before I have seen listed And quite marvelous they were, I was most impressed Her worst surely better than even my best Letting her words of beauty stroll through my head I was reminded of her splendor with each word read With an audience this time, I speak of you too I shall befriend her again, this I vow to do Yes I must try again, at whatever the cost To find what this marvoulus Lady has Lost |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Excellent poem...and good luck in your quest for love.... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I found you! It wasn't hard..and the title is quite appropriate. What can I say? Your poem is excuisite..beautifully written as well. I felt a STRONG personal connection with it. You are so talented..I always knew you were. Please keep posting..I can't wait to read more......Love, Lady notso Lost You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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