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Jerry
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since 1999-11-12
Posts 2


0 posted 1999-11-12 08:57 PM


MY CYBER ANGEL
I KNOW THIS LOVE THAT'S BEEN CONCEIVED,
THROUGH MILES OF ENDLESS WIRE,
IN MY HEART I DO BELIEVE,
I CAN GET NO HIGHER,

THE WAY YOU LAUGH, THE WAY YOU TALK,
THAT PROVES ONE THING TO ME,
THAT YOU AND I THROUGH JUST ONE CLICK,
ARE TRULY MEANT TO BE,

THE HOURS THAT WE'VE SPENT TOGETHER,
MOST EACH AND EVERY NIGHT,
I FEEL AS IF YOUR PART OF ME,
LIKE I'VE KNOWN YOU ALL MY LIFE,

TO BE WITH YOU THROUGH GOOD AND BAD,
I DREAM OF EVERY NIGHT,
THE TIME IS HERE, THE TIME IS NOW,
FOR US TO DO WHAT'S RIGHT,

IT MATTERS NOT, WHAT LOOKS YOU HAVE,
IT'S THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO,
I LOVE YOU FOR THE WAY YOU ARE,
I LOVE YOU, CAUSE YOUR YOU,

SO LISTEN CLOSE, AND SEARCH YOUR HEART,
IN CASE YOU'VE MISSED MY THOUGHTS,
THE NEXT FOUR LINES CAN'T BE MISTOOK,
NO WAY TO GET THEM CROSSED,

TO YOU I SAY, I HOPE YOU KNOW,
I WANT TO SHARE MY LIFE,
MY CYBER-ANGEL, CAN'T YOU SEE,
I WANT YOU FOR MY WIFE.

AUTHOR : Jerry Wence
please submit any comments you have on my poem... thank you.


© Copyright 1999 Jerry - All Rights Reserved
Angel
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since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-11-12 10:05 PM


This is really pretty and really sweet. Can't wait to see more

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People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy.
-Bob Hope


Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-11-12 10:52 PM


This is so sweet, one of the wonders of internet love is that you don't judge first on appearances; however, the risk you run is that the person is not really who they are acting to be- I like the poem, I just say, be careful on this one.

BTW- welcome to passions

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



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