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Open Poetry #48

Early March

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-03-08 01:33 PM

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A gray sky
And two crows—
Oak branches

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2012-03-15 03:03 PM

But it has been a warm march?

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2012-03-15 05:14 PM

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Juju

Not at the time written
It was the lion . . .

John

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ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2012-03-15 09:02 PM

Warm March, or not..

Only the aspen shows its flower,
Along the steeps with wet benches.

Coughs spread their wings on the north side..where the air feels the pain of still- winter.

Your Haiku is excellent. inspiring actually.

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

Ron63
Junior Member

since 2012-03-18

Posts 49
Suffolk, Eng, UK

4 posted 2012-03-18 02:24 PM

I like this Haiku. I like crows too, which I guess is why this poem strikes me. I can see the image in my mind and almost hear those crows squawking.

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