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Open Poetry #48
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MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
Posts 305
Lancashire England

0 posted 2012-03-12 06:49 AM



Tree of life

Weeping willow don't cry for me
I courted neath your shade
Confetti petals now set free
The silence of the glade

From mighty oak our English fleet
Protected sceptered Isle
Acorns fall as two lovers meet
Then contemplate a while

Through silver birch the dappled rays
The rising sun appears
To guide our path in forest maze
And chase away our fears

A crying boy neath chestnut tall
A boken string in hand
How long his wait for fruit to fall
Through time the running sand

A churchyard now and silent yew
Majestic in the dusk
Compared to you our years so few
Till just remains the husk.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-03-12 08:24 AM


Touching poetry. Using the tree as metaphors for each stanza is charming and tasteful.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2012-03-18 09:22 PM


Nicel...James
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