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gdcod2player
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0 posted 2009-06-08 10:55 PM



Was that you I saw in the theater?
Your strait hair has me deceived
Is it really you or just Him teasing?
This story of my life is a tease
How many times do I feel like something’s missing?
Ever girl I see has your face
Now I need to fade this memory

I’m a railroad of accidents that are meant to happen
Can I just be laid back beside this system that’s overwhelming me?

Can I kiss you?
Maybe I need you
Can I look in your eyes?
I need to learn everything about you
I need to find you before the end of my road

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2009-06-17 10:26 AM


"’m a railroad of accidents that are meant to happen"

...interesting phrase...an excellent definition of fatalism though...good write

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