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xxvampirecmxx
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since 2008-08-31
Posts 6
new york

0 posted 2008-09-01 11:28 AM



About Me

As I walk down a lonely street,
Beginning to remember as tears threatened to fall,
unable to control all my emotions inside of me,
Their words through out my head,
my mind speaks to me to my innermost core,
The wind speaks to me of unknown secrets,
flickers of light of pain go throughout me,
I know I could never forget the thoughts or stares of the people i have hurt,
I keep my head up high,
so confused,disguste,
About life and the times I have cried,
Even sometimes my chest hurts and the loneliness builds up,
the pain towards myself is hard to maintain within,
How much must I endure,
thinking again and again "What did I do?"
Day by day this feeling will fade away,
a new love I will gain in return,
Till then I will wait for him

Courtney

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-09-01 03:01 PM


Courtney,

I'd change the font to regular dark blue so people can see your poem.

It's nice to see something out of New York City.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (09-01-2008 04:20 PM).]

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