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stitching metal laughter |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is more than the stones now the chrome carrying clattering and I wonder do you hear me when you are a rocking chair with your knees in your hands watching the other woman watching wondering does she hear the music and know the words to sing or does she only move her lips and sing them from her belly throat joy unspeakable and wanting to wear the rings your trees do in the hands of the ravishing wind _______________ daark (white stone series) |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
your poetry has a delightful mystery surrounding it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Skaadee, thanks amigo..I appreciate your reads and comments |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
with licentious pouts Madonna wannabies daydream in tall trees. Indigo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your words awaken the spirit to remember the senses and to enjoy them as a God given gift. So beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi..thanks babe for the rub up against... _________________ ms mar, thank you special one for your eyes and soft touch |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Like appreciation in any art form, what we take away is profoundly impacted by what we bring; in heart, in mind, in emotion. Keep writing young man...You open doors of thought that lead us down amazing avenues of possibility. with smiles Lynda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lynda...why thank you young lady for the sweet words... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You make me want to collect rocking chairs and have them at every window. |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe... ________________ skaadee, thanks amigo |
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