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nevermore93 Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 73 |
There is a shadow that preys on each of us. It brings to us a fear beyond imagination. Its dark radiance haunts and chills our spines and our own fears come to full reallization. This shadow that follows our every move, knows too well the secrets we hold dear. It abuses our thougths for its own ambitions, of causing us terror by means of deadly premonitions. With its unending power over the human mind, the shadow manipulates our every emotion. Sanity becomes something that transcends time. And in the end you find yourself alone watching the rest of your life pass by. [This message has been edited by nevermore93 (10-26-2007 02:44 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to PIP, dear nevermore93! Thank you for your reply to my "hometown" too. quote: You have expressed this gripping feeling of fear and anxiety very powerfully. FEAR is the number one enemy of humanity. This fear is a kind of atavic heritage, but we can overcome it. I would say we need to overcome it, because otherwise we can't enjoy our existence, as you so cynically affirm in your last lines. When we move ahead on the path of faith, love, trust and joy, fear will gradually recede, while we move ahead. This said, I want to add that I enjoyed your thought provoking poem. Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I enjoyed it too! I'm not sure if I have welcomed you yet - so welcome to our blue pages RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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