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Open Poetry #41

The Quiet Gray Dawn

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2007-10-25 07:58 AM

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thin rain like cold oil

softened slick pathways and leaves

Autumn's bath ‘fore sleep

©2007 by icebox
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2007-10-25 09:27 AM

"Autumn's bath 'fore sleep"

Love it.

I for one am looking forward (with a bit of relief) to the dormant time...and so looking forward to the rebirth...it's been a long year.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-10-25 11:14 AM

Ahh, you see how elegantly you transform your visions into refined poetry?!
Thank you for this, it is exquisite.

Love,
Margherita

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-10-26 04:23 AM

welcome dawn!

The sun’s kiss at dawn
greets you and the world in peace
feel its touch of love

...even if hidden behind the clouds, we know it is there ... this dawn here in Rome is gray too today

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