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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-10-25 06:27 AM


you are the weaver's ocean
oh mistress of pearls
bathing the thighs of bronze
with winsome fingerings

goddess of mortal songs
I love the water of you
when it is your lips you peel
with knife of tongue

a smile's fillet in furrow
with whispered yes in mystery
then to dance before my eyes
at the end of your own hands

just a kiss of love away
from the dark syrup of sinful
oh what hound would not pant then
with face to window's anticipation

wagging the leather of youthful bones


__________

daark

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1 posted 2007-10-25 09:33 AM


"you are the weaver's ocean
oh mistress of pearls
bathing the thighs of bronze
with winsome fingerings

goddess of mortal songs
I love the water of you

when it is your lips you peel
with knife of tongue"


soooo diggin this D awesome write

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-10-25 11:35 AM


quote:
with face to window's anticipation

wagging the leather of youthful bones



Nothing will do, but masterful.

You stir such emotion with your words that one is forced to pause ... and read once again for a second wave of pleasure.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2007-10-25 11:58 AM



"than to dance before my eyes
at the end of your own hands"

stranger darlin'
how is it you turn words in such a manner that they enchant?
and they do enchant
and so much more


Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2007-10-25 12:19 PM




the alliterations make me think of JM.

the sensual is all DS.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2007-10-25 08:23 PM


wow!!  stunning write Mr Daark! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2007-10-26 06:22 AM


ms suesea, thanks hon for wearing those jewels

______________

ms mar, thank you for your eyes on my pen ends ms, you bless me

______________

ladyone, you dance there as a indigo pyre, thanks lady friend

_____________

susan c.  you are gracious to play me in the same sand as the lady moth...thank you


___________

ms R & R, thank you always for your eyes
from down under


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