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jennirey
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0 posted 2007-04-08 09:49 AM



April Snow

It snowed yesterday, as unexpected as that could be.
Down fell the wisps and shards of ice flakes in a never ending sea
They hovered and danced and frolicked on the breeze
They said hello to my garden
Hello to the rose, set to bloom sometime soon.
Hello to the long swords of the Glads that are still yet to swoon.
They struck my tomato and put it to never ending sleep
As peaceful as they may have seemed
they wreaked havoc on my garden dreams

Now my tomatoes bow their heads and weep
The rose is tinged with brown, and gently curling about the leaves
The Glads have turned dark green, and are lilting on the ground
Snow in April, Who’d have thought that could be
Here in Texas, I thought it was already spring.
It snowed yesterday, as unexpected as that could be.
Down fell the wisps and shards of ice flakes in a never ending sea
                   Jennirey 2007



© Copyright 2007 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
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1 posted 2007-04-08 09:52 AM


Wow!  Lovely imagery!  I felt as if I was floating through the air with the snowflakes!

Beautiful write!

Thanks for this...

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-08 10:16 AM


"As peaceful as they may have seemed
they wreaked havoc on my garden dreams"...love this. it reminds me that first year in St.Louis I could not wait to plant flowers in early April. two days later a storm ruined all of them.

enjoyed.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-04-08 10:46 AM


yep this is some crazy weather

I imagine hurricane season will be busy for all of us

kitkat
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4 posted 2007-04-08 12:30 PM


I enjoyed the image here.  If it helps nova Scotia had a whooping storm last night  about 12 inches..Hope spring stays soon sure would hate to miss it

kathy

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Gaia
5 posted 2007-04-08 12:35 PM


Seems as if we all had repeat taste of winter this weekend! Fortunately, we still have the option of replanting.
Margherita
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6 posted 2007-04-08 03:25 PM


I love Kacy's optimism ... "we can still replant".

Enjoyed your captivating description! I love flowers and I love the snow, but the order has been inverted here. When flowers pierce the snow, they are safe, but when snow covers them they are lost.

Love and happy Spring anyway!

Margherita

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