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0 posted 2007-04-05 04:17 PM


In Peripheral

In this place between night and dawn,
of empty-eyed buildings and discarded matchbooks,
haggard people pass each other,
tied together with yo-yo strings
that snap.
All over,
the sound follows.

And up and down the alleys walk
unspeakable creatures,
stalking children who
laugh and play in the dirt,
and forget they are old,
living and breathing,
death on their lips and
light in their eyes,
before morning comes.

© Copyright 2007 Matt Price - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-04-05 06:37 PM


this reminds me of driving through the city at night....what you see on the streets instead of the bright lights from the freeway.
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2 posted 2007-04-06 06:59 AM


very insightful poem

well written

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3 posted 2007-04-08 12:38 PM


chillingly surreal...yet 3D real
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4 posted 2007-04-08 03:20 PM


Impressively vivid!
Sad, but unfortunately so true.

Love,
Margherita

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