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A Guardian Of Dreams And The Gift Of Choice
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A Guardian Of Dreams And The Gift Of Choice |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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. In these late silly still hours of uncertainty, my soul is free to be at peace wrapped sheltering around your sleeping mind, never feeling me near as your day takes shape and time reforms along the norms humans need to stay safely back from the edge of fear, in linear chronology reality reliably seems to be more predictable than its chaotic truth, and when you wake I will return to sleep, the promise I keep, as you sort through wardrobe choices for your day, by breakfast time my crazy rhymes are left behind and you are standing tall, and walking free. ©2007 by icebox . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! sure made me think this morning...this will stay with me all day what strength shows here in this! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as ... day takes shape and time reforms along the norms humans need to stay safely back from the edge of fear, something one has to do to survive nice writing M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"reality reliably seems to be more predictable than its chaotic truth," Got to echo that one, icebox. Enjoyed as always! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The voice from a Shakespearean play kept playing in my ears reading the words to me...I love the way this poem made me feel and hear in such a beautiful way...*Big Hugs* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I really liked the reforms/norms play. The whole thing is nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*Smile* Thank you for sharing this lullaby of soul, Mr. C; there is such comfort in your not-so-crazy rhymes.  .....jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I wish I knew if anyone was, wrapped sheltering around my sleeping mind. Maybe I could sleep more soundly knowing that I was cared for that much. Charlie,I love your mind,and look forward to reading everything you write. martyjo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sort through your wardrobe choices...  and is it really okay to rhyme, and rhyme looks so much better on YOU. *laughing* I guess nobody told you that rhymes are sooooooooooooooo not poetry.  You wear them well my sweet, ever watchful, most observant friend.  yer beautiful |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Icebox A song came to me when I started to read this....Unsure of lyrics but here goes...In the cool hours and minutes of uncertainty I long to be in the warm hold of your loving mind? Can't remember who or more, just the tune, but the song played while I was reading. Your poem touched me. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Beautiful ... and now you have me thinking about wardrobe choices... and breakfast Love it!!!! Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"and time reforms along the norms humans need to stay safely back from the edge of fear, in linear chronology reality reliably seems to be more predictable than its chaotic truth" Profound truth...which I've come to expect from your words.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"reality reliably seems to be more predictable than its chaotic truth" turns my mind 'round and 'round brings it back to these words outstanding write! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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