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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-03-02 08:06 AM



it was in the dreams of the boy man
before his sinews became ink and leather
before the highway became his shield
and the dawn his only adversary

she was an ocean, that woman of night eyes
with the shimmering of skin and sounds
that were from her soul's depth
and her love was the undulating tide

her breasts were the sierras in spring
jutting heavenly into sky mind sighs
jaunty was her sway as she seduced the clouds
and tempted to arousal even the mind of god

she was the dunes of death valley summer
her shifting thighs a dancer in verve
the writhing of a gypsy was her wind music
the damp of her crying a swelter's kiss

but when the man boy was awakened
by but a whisper from her smile's brim
and her eyes brought lotion to his scars
without the dreams could he know her charms

that because of love had yearned him blind


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daark (forbidden)



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1 posted 2009-03-02 10:19 AM


*sighs*

this is beautiful D


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-03-02 11:25 AM


ms suesea..thanks babe!!
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3 posted 2009-03-02 04:00 PM


We often see what the heart the heart wants us to see.  Enjoyed much sir.  
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-03-03 07:36 AM


thanks so much Mark..
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5 posted 2009-03-03 03:10 PM


Now this is a beauty~


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-03-03 03:23 PM


thanks AW!!
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7 posted 2009-03-03 06:12 PM


quote:
it was in the dreams of the boy man
before his sinews became ink and leather
before the highway became his shield
and the dawn his only adversary

she was an ocean, that woman of night eyes
with the shimmering of skin and sounds
that were from her soul's depth
and her love was the undulating tide

her breasts were the sierras in spring
jutting heavenly into sky mind sighs
jaunty was her sway as she seduced the clouds
and tempted to arousal even the mind of god

she was the dunes of death valley summer
her shifting thighs a dancer in verve
the writhing of a gypsy was her wind music
the damp of her crying a swelter's kiss

but when the man boy was awakened
by but a whisper from her smile's brim
and her eyes brought lotion to his scars
without the dreams could he know her charms

that because of love had yearned him blind




Outstanding, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-03-03 06:31 PM


ms mar...thanks so much lady friend
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9 posted 2009-03-03 11:29 PM


wow!!! fabulous write...last line is a stunner
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2009-03-04 06:08 AM


Just wonderful Mr Daark!
Be well RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2009-03-04 07:25 AM


steavenr, humble thanks amigo

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ms r&b..thanks lady

ethome
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12 posted 2009-03-06 08:09 PM


"that because of love had yearned him blind"

Now that's a classic line.

Great work Dark you draw so well.

Eric

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13 posted 2009-03-07 06:37 AM


eric..thanks guy
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14 posted 2009-03-09 01:12 AM


quote:
she was an ocean, that woman of night eyes
with the shimmering of skin and sounds
that were from her soul's depth
and her love was the undulating tide

her breasts were the sierras in spring
jutting heavenly into sky mind sighs
jaunty was her sway as she seduced the clouds
and tempted to arousal even the mind of god

she was the dunes of death valley summer
her shifting thighs a dancer in verve
the writhing of a gypsy was her wind music
the damp of her crying a swelter's kiss



Oh man, D, you word-wrapped around my heart with this one.  This is sheer beauty.

A

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2009-03-09 07:57 AM


ms ali-san, it is always a pleasure to wordwrap your mind..thanks babe
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16 posted 2009-03-09 11:38 AM


had to re-visit this one...loved this on the second go-around:

" love had yearned him blind"

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