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Alison
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0 posted 2009-03-08 11:26 PM


Ida's poem "A Lady and Her Dog" reminded me of this poem that I have tucked away.  Please excuse misspellings, I was not a great spellchecker back then.  Also, if it is hard to read, again you have my apologies.  I was learning graphics when I wrote this.

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turtle
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1 posted 2009-03-09 03:11 AM


You leave my Granny alone.....heh

Besides it's blue not pink....

....stupid Wal-Mart hose.


secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2009-03-09 09:00 AM


yeah, this one was GREAT! (v. well done) ...

REALLY pleasant 'visual background' to the
'write' [and nice photo. of the author as well!]

return applause for this 're-post'!!

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-03-09 10:03 AM


Well, sweet girl Alison, you had me wondering about that "hose bagging" (I think I figured it out!). Can't say I lived those certain experiences till dawn ... must remember to include them as dreams to realize in my next life, in case there will be one!

The shopping cart is a great invention, but its use seems to classify the owner as old and there are ladies who wouldn't use it just for this reason.

One of my own forgotten dreams is to run like a gazzelle ... and Simon my grandson always wants me to run, of course he enjoys winning every time .... grrrr

This was very lovely and ironic/dramatic(especially as you did it at such a young age ... how do you know?).

I love your new picture too!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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