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a ripple away |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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I, like the river open broken; a butter-fly half forget the deep pools of rain that have gathered lonely you have left me empty fumbling with the darker undertones of my hair I only wanted to tell you in some closeness how the blades of sunsets once fell from blue marking our time of beginning now we have forgotten the green scattered across the invisible frame--just small fires burning leaving embers behind they no longer matter change the movement of touch & stillness is an act of will we no longer desire I wanted to forgive your hands for touch -ing your heart for lying but you left my heart like the stones ~ just a ripple away from drowning Life is a balance of holding on and letting go (KU) |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
I wanted to forgive your hands for touch -ing your heart for lying but you left my heart like the stones ~ just a ripple away from drowning Life is a balance of holding on and letting go (KU) Oh,my sadly beautiful,have we not each touched those dying embers wondering is worth the rekindling or let die in peace?
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 not the first, nor the last....thank you for your words....  Life is a balance |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
not the first, nor the last....thank you for your words.... Life is a balance You touch my spirit deeply little sister!
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wow! loved this! RDB |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautifully written Lauren. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I wanted to forgive your hands for touch -ing your heart for lying but you left my heart like the stones ~ just a ripple away from drowning" Wonderful write as always Lauren.  Sing in me muse... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I only wanted to tell you in some closeness how the blades of sunsets once fell from blue marking our time of beginning now we have forgotten the green sometimes when we meet people, they are good for us for only a short time...perhaps the blue is all you really had in common, not to mention, there are a few men, that cannot commit, nor take responsiblity into their vocabulary. It's how they were raised and what they believe about themselves. A person cannot give, what they haven't known. You deserve better Just look at you, I am breathless after reading you, and so happy to have seen your post....all your posts... Lady, your extremely intelligent, and sometimes that also intimidates men. Believe me, not all, but some, who are less then confident about themselves. Look for the green in the eyes lovely lady... whomever meets you is extremely lucky. Very very good writing. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
~Lauren, you tug with this and my heart aches for you but I know what lies within your soul dear, and it cannot be tied down....it soars....   sis.... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
granny....thank you RDB....appreciate you stopping by... Chris... Nancy...hugsss you and thanks.. Lee...sigh...thanks for saying that, it was needed...hugsss you Donna...luv ya... Hugsss to all for a peaceful and happy new year... with love...ME~ ~~**~~ Life is a balance of holding on and letting go (KU) |
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