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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Surrounded by forces a given choice to depart if infatuation had a start a blend of cause and effect as the world acts restores a semblance of harmony from the Japanese gift given as you left a Tokyo lift until the cab drove him away she had a crush on an older man married man the wife did not want to worry about distances to refind someone she loved so he met and left his princess far far away where song is only karaoke words lose there sense punch lines shed their humor was love discarded to be found again at a tunnels end? who knows how it is surrounded by alien syllables greeted by bows but he embraced the lady as the end of runway strip how love did slip untranslated.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"where song is only karaoke words lose there sense" ~ Memorable lines! Very creative! I could see it all playing out before my eyes! Your 'translation' was very vivid! Loving Light, EA  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff Martin |
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