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PoetrySinger
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0 posted 2006-10-23 12:40 PM



Sitting, staring
Excitement gone wrong
Listening, pondering
Stuck inside my own cell

Eating away at my mind
Flushing my soul of life
It never ends
This orbiting madness
Loneliness arrives
Silence swallows you whole
Strange faces envelope you

Solitude, darkness
Lost in the black hole
Of my own brain
Eyes grow heavy
Bricks on your skull
Drift away...
An uncharted adventure
Hoping, begging
Never to return


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1 posted 2006-10-25 11:09 PM


i have been there done that acually still am i thought this poem was very emotional and descrptive. therefor i liked it...
hunnie

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2 posted 2006-10-25 11:19 PM


PoetrySinger ~ Great name!

Hi there! Yeppers, I'd say that that is one mighty depressing midnight! May it be the last one! ~ not your last night! I mean your last depressing one!

I sure could feel it! Very expressive writing!

Loving Light,

EA

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3 posted 2006-10-26 07:49 AM


been there

well expressed

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