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Shining Secret. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Below the surface of me, an abstruse nature rests. Dormant it lays upon golden whispers, ready to be revealed and uttered in shadowed midnight. Like a returning echo from eras long forgotten, it shines, waiting to captivate again, sweet blissful souls, with rich dark secrets. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of one of those gourmet chocolates  you are even sweeter though |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Secrets are captivating and so are your words ! Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah to be there at shadowed midnight your golden whispers are lovely Goldenrose |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
One of your best I have read. But I am trying to turn whispers in words that can be heard. Well done Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes there is treasure there, waiting to be found, a chest full of golden coins, love coins of gold. Like a returning echo from eras long forgotten, it shines, waiting to captivate again...these were my favorite lines! |
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lightkeeper Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 100pluto |
x phil x The depth of your soul is as deep and wide as the oceans ..... many will spend a lifetime seeking such treasures, but rare are the seekers to which these oceans reveal their bounties . Love Bernadette xxx |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, how intriguing...  Still water runs deep! ~ and that can be a very good thing!  Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh! Now this one intrigues me!  Most certainly enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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