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DragonStar
Junior Member

since 2006-10-20

Posts 13
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-10-20 10:59 PM

The spring is about rebirth, regrowth and renewal
The spring is about God and His ultimate will
To impregnate the Goddess with her abundant creativity
To bring forth new life eventually
We hear the birds chirping and feel the Earth stirring
We call to the Goddess and She is awakening
The ground springs forth abundant with new life
The bees are dancing around in their hives
The trees grow new buds and the leaves are sproutin’
Spring is here, there’s no more need for poutin’
Stuck in the house all winter long
It’s now time for a brand new song

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2006-10-20 11:07 PM

great imagery!

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-10-20 11:43 PM

Welcome to Passions, Kelly!

You made a very nice entrance with this work! Nothing like a lovely breath of spring to prepare us for winter! I see you call Michigan home, as do I, so you know full well what I am talking about!

I look forward to reading more of your work, and I hope you find inspiration in some of the authors here. They are a wonderful group of talented people.

Welcome again, Kelly! And thank you for your inspiring work!

Sandra

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-10-21 01:26 AM

Welcome to pipTalk.com, DragonStar!

With your fresh and revitalizing poem on Spring, you have me already looking forward to the end of winter! lol

A delight to read in any season!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2006-10-21 01:46 AM

Welcome to Passions Kelly,
Great write, nice to see sum new writers around. Good start keep it up..

Jessica

DragonStar
Junior Member

since 2006-10-20

Posts 13
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-10-22 05:52 PM

Thank You so much for the compliments. This was actually assigned to me when I was going through some spiritual training. It was originally 13 lines (per the assignment) but I never liked the last line, didn't feel right to me, so I chucked it and then posted.

Thanks Again!

Love and Light, Blessed Be!!!

Kelly

'Do not follow the Path. Go where there is no path and begin the trail.' -Ashanti Proverb

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