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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Follow Follow your mind into shadow And you will find its source of light Stay your thoughts within this meadow And your very soul will ignite Sense the dew that forms on grass Raise your eyes the light of dawn See the clouds the color of brass Feel once more a day is born Watch the flowers rise and wake See the birds fly overhead The butterflies in nectars take A world of hunger to be fed Extend your hand in empathy Allow your grace to fill the air Give your mind in sympathy Touch the touchstone everywhere And in the sum of one on one The purpose of your life is done |
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Becky Mangrum Member
since 2006-10-18
Posts 56 |
I hope some day to get where you are with my writing. You know how to make a person feel your words. Enjoyed it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Becky, We are all poets, but some of us don't know it. LOL Thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nicely summed up sir Sey. Lovely rhyme for my Friday morning to wake up with. Hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Your gentle spirit has kissed me awake. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy dear...this is a favorite!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie As you are to me.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SeymourDearestSeymour~ 'See the clouds the color of brass Feel once more a day is born' Your word-palette is loaded with the true colors of the morn~ Within your rhyme ... new day is born~ I would 'follow' you rhythmically just to LEARN~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And you are my space of grace. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and anyone who follows your path, Dear Man, will one day reach the stars! An awesome write of Light ~ and most assuredly another keeper! Yer beautiful! Loves 'n hugs 'n angel kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel If this didn't come from an Angel I wouldn't believe it. LOL   |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very wise, sir Sy...as always...you set the mark and the rest of us stumble before we get there. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Follow your mind into shadow And you will find its source of light of course you knew the part I'd choose |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Seymour, Regrettably I have not visited here in a while. But I am so glad that your poem is the first that I read since I came back. It really makes me see what I have been missing. As always, you have lifted my spirit. Thanks my friend! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Friday poem? seems I have followed a little late Sir Sy but that does not distract from the poem's beauty "Watch the flowers rise and wake" works on Sunday too... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i like this very much Mr Tabin. Found that if the light is showing, it the only place i see my shadow except within the mind, for when i turn it one of the direction the real shadow appers, till darkness or in my mind. I if read this in difference, sorry just my thoughts on your write. Which you do very well Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
What a wonderful path you've shared here... May we all follow the light that we so naturally are drawn to... Peace, Seymour! ~Moonkist~ : ) O ( : Freedom Now |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Haven't seen you stumble yet. LOL passing, Yes I did. TerryW, Glad you are back my friend and thank you. Lady, I know you watch the flowers. bslicker, Enjoyed your comment. Moonkist Peace and thank you. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Just a small bump so that this beauty might grace anothers eyes. You are inspiring. Sandra |
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