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Heaven Holds
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Heaven Holds |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Heaven Holds The spheres of Heaven slowly turn As hearts collide in solar burn Leaving trails of white tea scent Guide a promise made and meant Two hearts wander sighs so moist Entranced in lunar songs now voiced These lips that tremble wait so warm Comprise the light, celestial storm Two suns entwined in eager chance Beat strong in passions blissful dance Igniting sparks of molten fire Hold back in lingered fierce desire Release assured in tongue-tied ache Exploring just for Heaven’s sake And heaven knows the verse so scribed Along the lines, arms opened wide Eclipsed by nights soft hands are heard In Braille the need of every word The spheres of Heaven rapt inside On lover’s lips as stars collide Copyright Kkh 10/11/06 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how I do love white tea scent!! wonderful poem! |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, TD. This has a great rhyming scheme, as well as a terrific flow. There is some great imagery in there as well. All-in-all, a romantic delight. John Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Eclipsed by nights soft hands are heard In Braille the need of every word" oh yeah... sensual and very lovely TD |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is one of your best! And I love the imagery! |
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Emerald Isles New Member
since 2006-10-12
Posts 8Ireland,Ingonish Cove |
Very creative writing, you have talent! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD....You have such command over your poems...each one is so beautifully done..wish there was a more original word, but you write beautifully...so there!  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you each for all of your gentle words. TD |
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