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Refugee
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0 posted 2006-10-09 11:34 AM


Let me be your sixth sense
All five wrapped in one
Be all that you ever wanted
Be your secret, second to none

In your garden
I tend the ripening vine
To ease the constant pain
This longing which is mine

To probe your depths
Utter fathoms explore
To take your tears
Turn into rain, I implore

Brush your cheek
With words from this pen
To light up your eyes
And never know the void again

Thus awaken a new day
Yield your heart and soul
To someone also left for dead
That now is made whole


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-10-09 12:05 PM



Everyone needs to rely
on their sixth sense...

and I like the way
you've laid it out.


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-10-09 12:38 PM


Refugee~

'Brush your cheek
With words from this pen'


Such a lovely thought~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-10-09 05:13 PM


Many soft thoughts glide upon your reference.
Warmth reaches out in this write.  

Juju
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4 posted 2006-10-09 07:37 PM


Well done

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

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