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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-08 02:59 PM



As i always say, thanks for reading and for your cheers, it really sets me up to continue writing.

this one is a dream i had, nearly a week ago.
and i decided to write it.

here it goes

Sometimes I dream

Sometimes i dream
that you are here
next to me
smiling

i feel a lot of joy
i feel that i love you

heaven knows
that since you left
i'm missing you
everyday a little more

hell knows
that my soul i will offer
just to bring you back a day or two

sometimes i dream
that you have come back
sometimes i dream
that we are together again
and some other times
which are the best
i dream that you never left

© Copyright 2006 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved
Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...
1 posted 2006-10-08 03:10 PM


Again I find myself thinking what wonderful dreams you have. I seem to have strange dreams containing vast and elaborate Machiavellian plots (usually involving hats for some strange reason). I should maybe lay off the cheese for a while.

Anyway enough of my inane ranting. I enjoyed this a lot. Keep on writing so that I may continue to read.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-10-08 05:02 PM




"and some other times
which are the best
i dream that you never left"

nice work...

DreamerSpirit
Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
3 posted 2006-10-09 08:01 PM


thanks for reading and i'm glad you liked it

i'll keep writing so i hope you will enjoy my next poems too!

Denis.

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