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xjx
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0 posted 2006-10-09 06:43 AM



this isnt really a poem, just my feelings put on paper, i wish i could write like everyone here,here goes..


Its 4yrs since we lost you Mum,where has all the time gone.i still remember every detail of how the illness took over and tore us all apart. I miss you every day Mum, you were my guiding star, you should be here planning my do and just showing me the right way..time doesnt heal,no matter what they .

say, time carnt heal the pain i feel ..I"ve not changed or learnt any lessons , i still make the same mistakes.I know you wanted so much from me and i let you down every day..Kids are doing well now , ?You"d be so proud of Stacey now, Daniels kept a job, a few years now, even Collins working...

Hamish misses you as much as i do but hides it well, I know they say everything happens for a reason but i carnt see why you had to go, you never had time to enjoy those around you or to see the kids grow up. Sophie would make you laugh, you"d tell Donna it serves her right, Sarah"s very quiet ,,

Marks like Daniel and carnt live without the pc,. I know your with us every day,I hear you shout my name,its not the same though Mum, i want you here with me, you gave me life but without you what is there..I love you Mum, and wish you here with me ...R.I.P 20th/6/44 to 14th/1/2002


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1 posted 2006-10-09 07:23 AM


welcome to Passions Julie

a heartfelt letter here, thanks for sharing

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2 posted 2006-10-09 12:46 PM


Julie~
You've touched my heart with your penning~

If a *cyber-hug* can help at all ...
know that I send one your way~

Welcome to PiP, dear~
Write, write, write ... it helps, Honest Injun~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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The Lady
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3 posted 2006-10-09 04:49 PM



welcome Julie
I enjoyed your words

xjx
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4 posted 2006-10-09 09:23 PM


thank you , (hug) x
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