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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-10-07 06:48 AM


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One Day to Love

07 October 2006


Six days of the week
but only one day to love
That day I fall in love with you
as if it will ever be a dream coming true

A day of hope, a day of faith
this day where your emerald eyes in grace
A smile as wide as the largest ocean
this Pacific embraced within your heart
The moment you and I are together in one
a place neither distant nor oceans departed

As if inseparable and unbreakable
as the strongest glass
A day God will indeed decide
when feelings and affections neither hide

Two, standing together,
your hair brighter than the sun
This day of seven, the one of the rest
because each other day, will be more
In an unbuttoning of passions
to thank Christ and God, the Almighty
letting go and massaging away one in stress


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Walter_Mitty_Esq
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since 2006-06-01
Posts 21

1 posted 2006-10-09 05:58 PM


Sir Christopher, I think you're one of the best I've ever read. I really don't know why people don't comment on your poems. I've seen you express your concerns over that from time to time, but really, with your talent you needn't care. I hope you get your poems published.


poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
2 posted 2006-10-09 09:04 PM


thank you for your comment, I have published several books of my own poems, only I have now hoping to look at options if available to be published in the USA and Canada. However I am not exactly where to start or who to contact about this becoming a reality.
http://www.reginapublications.com is my web site and there is a link on that page to purchase and download some of my books as e-books to be read in adobe reader.

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