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lilhintofmocha
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0 posted 2006-10-07 09:25 PM


A brutal heartache

Thousands of tears

Mascara bleeding down my face

Tons of chocolate

And hugging my pillow tightly

I can't think

I can't move

For it bears too much pain

I am only thinking of you

As I stare blankly at the rain

I miss you....

XOXO,
Kaitlyn

© Copyright 2006 Kaitlyn Lynch - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-07 09:26 PM


Hi Kaitlyn

welcome to Passions

good first post, I know how it feels

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-10-07 09:36 PM



Welcome to Passions, lilhint.  

Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!


seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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3 posted 2006-10-08 11:01 AM


Welcome to passions, Kaitlyn.

Excellent first post. You nailed something we have all felt, and did it so well.

Sandra

INclan
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4 posted 2006-10-10 07:17 PM


Been there ... done that.
Good first Post.
Welcome to Passions'

INclan

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2006-10-12 05:30 PM


Nice writing...James
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Gaia
6 posted 2006-10-12 11:15 PM


yes, they sure do, but they also leave us with lots of poetry

welcome, Kaitlyn

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