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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Well, as always thank you all for reading my poems...and for posting those critics that help and those congratulations that help too!.. I must apologize, in my last poem (For my friends) i met a mistake, orthography...i wrote "Toghether", while it is "Together" i still don't know what happened though...in any case i apologize. here we go, Those Words I Sometimes remember about the last night that we were together and about that silence about those words those words that we couldn't say I sometimes think about those expressions those eyes, those tears those words that we couldn't say when i dream about you talking to me i thing on those words those words that i'll never know those words that maybe just maybe could have changed everything when i think about the last night that we were together i try to imagine what did you want to say if it was the same thing i wanted to say or if it was something else.. but now it's just too late and you are already gone i'll just wait someday you will come and you will tell me and i will tell you so we can both say those words those words that we couldn't say |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
someday you will come and you will tell me and i will tell you so we can both say those words those words that we couldn't say ~*~ Going past the love of this... you'll find yourself on the pathway to Love. I enjoyed. Thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my policy now is to say and do things you want to today because you don't know if you have tomorrow good write here Denis |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
thanks, as always, for reading i'm glad you enjoyed reading it. and if you see any positive change on my writing, it's because of all your advices that have been helping me. thanks! . Denis. |
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