Open Poetry #39 |
Haiku (Hunting Season) |
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whitetail grazing glade unaware of hunter’s gaze. Eagle watches all. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
What a treat you've given us today, Jo. All three are a pleasure to read - well done! Hugs - Helen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done...all of these!!! |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
These are wonderful! Thankyou so much for sharing! ~Kira |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
NICE!!! j. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
perfect |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, definitely perfect....just the right blending... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Terrific!!!! I agree with Magnus. miscellanea |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I agree with everyone else terrific is the word jo... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Moments of special Treating eye to wonder's heart Blessed are they who know |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Solitary doe silently watches me nap wrapped in autumn arms INclan |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Glad you all liked it. Thanks so much. ...jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have actually "seen" this twice now Once up North near 100 Mile House and now here. Beautiful work. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, S., I'd sure love a real picture of that. Thanks a bunch....jo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Though I've never been a real fan of hunting, my cousin Jeremy loved hunting, and I respect how everyone has their own interests and there can be a sort of serenity and appreciation of nature in the life of a hunter that I have never quite perceived! (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can see and sense the scenario! Jo, you are very adept at capturing such moments and then skillfully relaying them to your readers. Very well done! Loveya! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Watch the deer come close just outside the cottage door hoof tracks in the snow. A most excellent one! I really appreciate reading these Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I will never make a hunter, Iliana. The danger in your poem is imminent. You make me remember one I wrote a long time ago. I'll see if I can find it to post. ~ K |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It was worth it to share this one just to read the lovely responses. Thanks to you all so much. *hugs*....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jo, hey lady, I am loving all these haiku from you! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kacy, hi lady! Thanks. It's good to hear from you and glad you liked them. *hugs*....jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How about a wee picture minus the hunter, now isn't that nice? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sharon, this is unbelievable! Thank you for sharing this....just amazing! ....jo |
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