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seraphin
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0 posted 2006-10-03 01:24 PM



If you weep for the innocent
who have perished by the hand
of one named to protect
rise to your feet
please stand
and be counted.

if your eyes blink in wonder
at the sight of bodies small
being carried home to families
then say
I am appalled
and be counted.

if you know the right words
that will alleviate this plight
then take pen in hand
and for God’s sake
do write
and be counted.

if a child has been given you
to raise, then raise them right
teach them where the power is
for it is words we speak
and write,
and they will be counted.


© Copyright 2006 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
seraphin
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1 posted 2006-10-03 01:37 PM


In this life, I will be counted: 1

how say you?

Magnus
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2 posted 2006-10-03 07:31 PM


Let us hope that we all can be counted.
For I do believe there are far more that
need help than there are helpers...

seraphin
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3 posted 2006-10-03 07:35 PM


absolutely. Recent events show the depths we as a society have sunk to. We need to each stand and be counted. One voice is a mere whisper, but imagine hundreds of voices standing together. That has always been our strength, standing together. It seems we have forgotten how to stand shoulder to shoulder. I am standing next to you Magnus.

[This message has been edited by seraphin (10-04-2006 10:21 AM).]

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-10-03 10:59 PM





count me
as standing next to you
next to Barry...

a remarkable work Sandra
thank you

seraphin
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5 posted 2006-10-03 11:20 PM


standing shoulder to shoulder 3 strong. we still need more for a miracle.

[This message has been edited by seraphin (10-03-2006 11:54 PM).]

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-10-04 04:28 PM


but your poem
is the miracle
Sandra...
that even one heart cares
and we have three...

seraphin
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7 posted 2006-10-04 04:30 PM


Thank you for the boost, Lady.
passing shadows
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8 posted 2006-10-04 10:07 PM


I say AMEN!!
seraphin
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9 posted 2006-10-04 10:14 PM


Dixie,

You do brighten my day

Sandra

sandgrain
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10 posted 2006-10-04 10:26 PM


Yes, yes!  Our hurry-scurry society has isolated families and neighbors.  I'd love to stand with you and be counted as one who cares.


    Rae

seraphin
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11 posted 2006-10-04 11:08 PM


Now we are 5. Thank you Rae!

Sandra

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