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0 posted 2006-10-04 08:04 PM


Still….those waters that run deep…
The clouds that stand lifeless high
Above, the statue that gazes skyward,  half
Naked except for a figs leaf…blank eyes
Unblinking…a portrait of a thousand years
Past…A simple memory of a great one whose
Hands delicately touched the smooth stone
From whence life was born and cast immortal.
The fountain where wishes still sprinkle
the water as lover's eyes flit and tease
and a simple coin darts and weaves to the
perilous depths.

Still…the bloods that rise and fall within
My veins as a thought brings  to my heart
A sudden skip…and then,  a moment having
Passed as would a shallow but endless
Wave…and the tides of my heart rage on.

For now,  still be the mind and lonesome
Be the soul….as hands trace hearts on
The steamed mirror….just before the
Crack,  the fall of a jagged portrait and
the end of what was but a dream,
and nothing more.


© Copyright 2006 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-10-04 08:52 PM


Barry,
"But a dream and nothing more," I would say not. For the dream is the nectar of the butterfly. and where would the world be without a butterfly?

gypsyheartx
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2 posted 2006-10-04 08:54 PM


"Wave…and the tides of my heart rage on."

Painted a beautiful picture for me, thanks for sharing I really liked it.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2006-10-04 08:59 PM


Your painting moved me.
Sometimes, there is a widening in the path we walk, and fate sends love to us to fill the void. Beautiful write.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-10-04 09:10 PM


very vivid Barry


The Lady
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5 posted 2006-10-04 11:25 PM



sigh...
beautiful work Barry


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