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Open Poetry #39

She is Time

Refugee
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since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-09-27 08:57 AM

She is time
She is ethereal as such
She is on my mind
Emblazoned there to touch

With my thoughts of tenderness
Clean and pure for all its worth
Lost in this wilderness
Of an alternate type of Earth
Where the thoughts are the deed
To drive the point home
For that which I ever need
To never spend eternity alone

She is as ageless as the stars
Held transfixed in the sky
Yet travels near and far
Always just behind my eye
For in the mind, forever exists
That much is proven true
What else could explain this
Whence thoughts of love flew

She is eternal above all
She is forever in my mind
Makes me rise and fall,
She is time

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-09-27 09:14 AM

She is
and you've defined
etheral
in a lovely way.

Thank you.

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2006-09-27 09:20 AM

Beautiful

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2006-09-27 10:46 AM

beautiful indeed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-09-27 10:52 AM

Never lost, and always found
The meter of this one is spellbinding.

Such talent...such tenderness...
A keeper.

um_idk
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

5 posted 2006-09-27 10:47 PM

this really was beautifull

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-09-27 11:51 PM

"With my thoughts of tenderness
Clean and pure for all its worth"

~ and your tender thoughts are indeed, clean and pure ~ and worth a great deal! I enjoyed reading them!

Loving Light,
EA

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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7 posted 2006-09-27 11:52 PM

Refugee, I hope you find a refuge here in these blue pages, for a long, long time. We need such as you.

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