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Open Poetry #39

Circles ever dying

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-09-26 08:17 PM

Circles ever dying

Sea bells ring the dawns not ready
To signal shapes from shadows fell
The sacred source of ravens blood
Gulls left crying, feeding, sighing
Old sounds are new, each time steady
New waves are ever churning well
Tell fire gavels the chance be good
A new beast brooding, laying, dying

I am the two-toed wanderer

[This message has been edited by themute (09-28-2006 11:49 PM).]

william foos
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa

1 posted 2006-09-28 02:54 PM

well the sea
is only beatiful
from a distance
the colser you
get
all you see
is the salty tears
from it's disrespected
sickness

great write
keep doing well
love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-09-28 11:34 PM

What is it with the ravens making me cry of late? First Dark, and now you! I think maybe it's not the raven, but rather the stark beauty of the writen words. I cannot begin to tell you how much your words pull at my mind. I watch you mix style with format, and blend a rhapsody that reverberates with power. Regardless of format, your power shows through.

And I like this one alot, too!

Sandra

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-09-28 11:40 PM

quoth the mute

for always and forevermore
the circle changes...
yet stays

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