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themute
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0 posted 2006-09-26 09:17 PM



Your life through windows

Hallowed brush swipes, you stood the doorways current
Leaf-rustle gardens of fear, loathing,
Emotion springs from the bottom to the infinitesimal top
Looming powerful dark severity
A dawn dusked too does come to dance the sun-song
Endearing hymns to the infant flowers
Tearing eyes as dew of dawn collects their happy sadness
Into the rays we followed solemn
Where the length of days are obvious infinity, immortal
Gods among veiled gayety dreamt
So no breath would end tangible thoughts from windows
Envisioned in their perpetual signings  

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
marcel
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az, usa
1 posted 2006-09-28 12:45 PM


a vision of words and emotions that paint a sad but true picture of the heart........
themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland
2 posted 2006-09-28 11:52 PM


marcel, the story is ambiguous. and thank you kindly  

I am the two-toed wanderer

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