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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-09-05 11:42 AM



just a passing latte buy
spinned around hello
with highways talking back

about hurry somewhere recognition
we have done the one oh one
at different times in our minds

like brother and sister doors
on the same side of our rooms
wondering of the sundowns beyond

the other's side behind looking
without mirrors but with eyes
and you smiled more often then

perhaps pretty triggered something

_______________

daark

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Cloud 9
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1 posted 2006-09-05 12:10 PM


***sigh***

Good morning!

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-09-05 12:29 PM


ms nine, thanks for the sip up sigh
Martie
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3 posted 2006-09-05 12:55 PM


DS

"I feel pretty, oh so pretty
oh so pretty and witty and gay,"

See what you made me do?  

Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2006-09-05 12:55 PM


it always does... when it goes beyond mirrors and the "hurry somewheres"

images infinite... and a soft turn...sundown heart

~ K

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-09-05 01:00 PM


ms martie...you are so cute with your huggies..and coffee, thanks lil neighbor

___________

ms kl, you always look between the layers
at the soft folds between, thanks ms for the touch

Sunshine
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6 posted 2006-09-05 01:32 PM


with highways talking back

about hurry somewhere recognition
we have done the one oh one
at different times in our minds

like brother and sister doors

~*~

Now this is talking time to me...
and I thank you for that.




Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-09-05 01:34 PM


ms sun, a bit of speak is always good, thanks lady friend
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2006-09-05 04:32 PM


images and visuals, without the mirrors
seen through the eyes and mind...

yep, pretty often makes the smiles.

enjoyed your journey here dark bud.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-09-05 05:22 PM


ms gs, thanks little lady friend, always a pleasure to see you lookin in
MGROVES
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10 posted 2006-09-05 10:07 PM


enjoyed, as always

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

The Lady
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11 posted 2006-09-05 10:19 PM




"just a passing latte buy
spinned around hello
with highways talking back"

thanks for the ride
Stranger...


Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2006-09-06 07:45 AM


ms groves, thanks for the eyes

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ladyone, my pleasure for the sip sigh

Dr.Moose1
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13 posted 2006-09-06 09:47 PM


DS,
You convey a riot of images in full spectrum, the mind is never disappointed.
Doc

seraphin
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14 posted 2006-09-06 09:51 PM


This one snuck by me. I must have been looking out the window. Glad we made a second pass. I would have been sorry to miss it.

Sandra

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2006-09-07 07:17 AM


friend doc, thank you for the read and comment.

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ms sandra, thank you for being close when it whispered again

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16 posted 2006-09-09 02:47 AM


:: Smiles ::

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