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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-09-06 11:19 AM



No, it couldn't be;
what was that you said?
Was it my imagination
running through my head?

I was almost certain;
yes I could have sworn.
Sorry, I don't speak that language
to me, it's just too foreign.

I think that I need
to go and check my ears
cuz that lil sentence?
I know I can't be hearing.

Is it really possible,
could I actually have heard?
No, no way,
you could not have said
Those three little words..

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-09-06 11:36 AM


Oh Donna!  There are times we just cannot believe our ears!
But these words we love to hear over and over again.
You sound much happier.
Love ya lady~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-09-06 11:44 AM


Smiling at you Nancy and chuckling.  Amazing what difference three words can make huh, and how many different three words there are?   
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-09-06 01:48 PM




de  light ful!

Nikerlz
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California
4 posted 2006-09-06 03:33 PM


I LOVE IT!  =)

BK

Dublin Boy
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UK
5 posted 2006-09-06 04:41 PM


A very nicely-written piece--I enjoyed reading this.
Cheers,
Bill

The Lady
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The Southwest
6 posted 2006-09-06 11:55 PM




wonderful...



aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2006-09-09 02:50 AM


This. Is. Wonderful.

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