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The Lady
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silk skirt splendor
mudbugs and tabasco on her lips
she sucks slippery fingers
adjusts thigh hose
toe dangles high heeled slipper

charcoal man rolls cigar
finger to finger
grazes brim of his Panama
eyes strolling room
long finger smoothing mustache

she brings napkin to her mouth
he reaches
   leave it
   ma poupée    
raises glass
to her
wet lips

but I need more
she pouts
red lip bending to heart

   I know darlin’
   I know
© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!


1 posted 07-29-2006 03:00 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Hmmm, I got my fix ~ NOW I can sleep.
The Lady
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Thank you aziza.
He keeps me up till
all hours with his
roguery.
Sleep well.

Dark Stranger
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yep, pass the dutchie and strum the iron ferr..you got the shiver slip on your zymindeco..enjoyed it lady one
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Listening to every heart


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Ah, Lady...
you write him well.

seraphin
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You paint your characters so incredibly well. I  can see the Charcoal Man in my minds eye with such clarity, and...my gosh! Dark! is that you!!
As with all the others, I enjoy your creations so much.

OwlSA
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Wow!

- Owl
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Glad you enjoyed it Stranger.
Thank you.

Thank you so much Karilea.
He tells it so well.

Thank you for your kind
words,  seraphin.

Diana, as always, I
appreciate your reply.

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


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I am bringing this man and his woman back tonight ~ every story.  They have been in the corner too long.

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