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0 posted 2006-06-29 10:46 PM


This is ext remely cliche but my girlfriend liked it and I know it is out of season but here it goes anyways!

Sunday, February 12, 2006
Topic: Nubian Valentines
Love is blind…if so I consider my vision cloaked,
Astray in a pendulum of sentiment
Radiant, evoked with a passion that God Envies
Fervor my feelings to you, for I have perceived a bountiful future
5 years complete, we have become one and the same
Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman
Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed
The day we announced our fidelity, time froze
U are mine, a sign from the divine
With time, we will devise a future together
Feathered touch, us fettered,
Forever my divine wish be true
Tethered for eternity just me…
…and you…


"How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live"
                     Anonymous (Unknown)

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1 posted 2006-06-29 11:26 PM


any day of the year is OK for a Valentine's love letter
no critique, not on a heart write

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