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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-06-26 07:08 PM





Alone with my thoughts
What else would I have expected
on this the day I would love to share.

Tomorrow will be no better
So I push the pull out of me
realizing it is under my care.


Why should one day be
more special than another in life
when I hold the key deep in "not".

Yes, tomorrow will be no better
but I will remember once again
this day today forgot.


~~**~~

Tomorrow is another to remember once again
shared by my sister's leaving
hard to forget that particular "when".

Should be the happiest, this time of year for me
But instead would love to disappear
remaking the past that be.

~~*~~

It's been raining hard the most of
(uncontrollable tears inside)
And yet I sit here "just because"
there's nowhere else to hide.

I'm done I think with tomorrow's thoughts
and better live today's.
It's been raining hard the most of here
too much of too little this way.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Magnus
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1 posted 2006-06-26 07:13 PM


Never fear, the sky will clear, the breeze
will caress and the birds will sing a song
for you..

Margherita
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2 posted 2006-06-26 07:33 PM


Sometimes we really absorb the greyness of rain ... and that's the feel I get from your melancholic words.

But tomorrow will be the day you will welcome and fill with serenity.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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3 posted 2006-06-26 07:37 PM


It is a difficult time for you Maureen..
a time of sad memories,
and it must be hard to celebrate your birthday.
Just know that we here at Passions care..
and I do hope even though it was quiet
your birthday had moments of happiness.
Heart hugs~Nancy

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4 posted 2006-06-26 07:38 PM


*touching the screen*
passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-06-27 04:41 AM



SmartChick
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6 posted 2006-06-27 07:11 AM


Beautiful Maureen! Although, it is sad.
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2006-06-27 05:25 PM


Barry..still waiting for the sky to clear...beginning to feel moldy here  in the MidAtlantic

Margherita...plenty of serenity around..sometimes a bit too much, thank you hugs

NancyLee...well the rain helps keep the day solemn and I did receive a lovely bouquet yesterday


serenity, *touching the screen* ...touching back knowing you understand.

Thanks Dixie and Sue..for always being there.

M

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