Accepting Her Independence

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Open Poetry #38

Accepting Her Independence

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-06-14 07:19 PM

Accepting Her Independence

When she swept
my back lanai
it seemed so
much cleaner.

But why?

Because I liked her.
And so I liked almost
everything she did.

Except when she
left me.

JamesLee
13June
2006
Its also my
independence.

Frank W. Torres
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since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

1 posted 2006-06-14 07:30 PM

Sad.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-06-17 08:53 PM

Thanks for the nice response...
Yes there have been some sad moments...some happy ones also...we shared mostly wonderful times together...and she goes with my blessing...James

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

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az, usa

3 posted 2006-06-19 04:50 PM

left me with a feeling of a powerful loss, with such few words........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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4 posted 2006-06-19 06:23 PM

It's your independence too, as you say.

This is short yet very well rendered, dear James.

Love,
Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-06-19 06:37 PM

James?

C'mere

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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6 posted 2006-06-20 07:51 AM

Hiya James,

life comes around two fold when you gift it, I think?

Have a glorious day

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2006-06-20 11:25 AM

I sense your sadness ~ and your resigned acceptance.

May your independence day be a liberating one.

Sending you a loving hug,

Linda

arthur
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england

8 posted 2006-06-20 02:10 PM

the sorrows of a lost love

never cease to pain

arthur

passing shadows
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displaced

9 posted 2006-06-20 05:52 PM

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2006-06-22 04:08 AM

Thank you Marcel, Margherita, Enchantress, Lee J., Earth Angel, Arthur and passing shadows for the nice responses...it is a process to accept the loss of someone you care for...and to begin to understand that it is a new beginning...James

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