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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-06-21 02:47 AM


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Where At Is At

21 June 2006


When this road has walked
and time has stood still
There was always tomorrow
after that swallowed bitter pill

No one to blame, no one to love
this giving of hope, a suffragette
and refugee of time passing by
Those questions, no answers
oh so oh, was it why

Why was it this did happen
was it really in truth, love
Maybe no one can say
right or wrong, weak to strong

For a poet does speak
yet words were all of that
When this road has walked
and there you are, where at is at


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2006-06-21 06:41 PM


where at is at indeed

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

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2 posted 2006-06-21 11:41 PM


It is a place, and an answer, only known by two. Two, and only by either if they are in total truth each to the other, when they travel that road.

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poettothecars
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3 posted 2006-06-21 11:48 PM


Ratleader - your comment was truly touching and I like what you had to say

For even the poet at times needs to be reminded of their own words, especially when seen through another eyes

a poet who cares

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