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Edward Grim
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0 posted 2006-06-06 05:17 PM



Mute and the Finger Bill

The market place.
Since its commencement
its commerce had been down.
Money, found to be all too useless
for it didn’t exist anymore;
and traders squandered their pay
on non-diseased hired company.
It was a sand floor plan,
shirts and shoes desired
but not required.

There were strict rules
against the career of
thrifty fingers.
Purloiners couldn’t get away
or play the piano after being caught.
A thief lost a digit per stolen item,
ten items or fewer.
The infamous Finger Bill.

But pilferers weren’t important,
the dry-tongued ones were though.
Starving and thirsty peasants
without currency.
Merchants wanted money,
no buyers.
Peasants wanted food,
no sellers.
Deadly cycle.

The little boy,
called the Mute,
was particularly loud
with his stomach snarling and sneering.
He could only think
of his hungry family,
and could only remember
the Finger Bill.

Mute walked
to the town square,
more like a circle
but nonetheless a square.
He played his harp
(with only four strings left)
for the last time.
He played Smoke on the Water,
appropriate.

Then to the merchant…

Mute looked at the bearded fat man
with record player eyes
playing the saddest music ears could conceive.
Mute held up his hands.

His family ate that night.
Bread, water, apples,
and the best Kokoro ever.
It was finger licking good,
well,
not for Mute.
Subtotal was nine out ten.

I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person.

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1 posted 2006-06-06 05:37 PM


dang, you did it again
left me speechless
though not fingerless

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