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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-06-06 02:21 PM


Original stuff circa 2000

I post this original stuff because it is the original words of ideas and you do hit a point where you are looking for original words, and the back of the head says, you wrote this years ago

Dave

Flittering lace you flitter a spectrum of movable colour emphasising
Some inner sense why
Within your head demanding obscurity for ignorance of your mind
Echoing colour you desire
Unmoving controlling assurity beckoning
You flutter your life
A canvas of hearts
Beckoning parts
Headless
of desire



© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Jess
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1 posted 2006-06-06 11:28 PM


"A canvas of hearts..." how lovely.
JL
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2 posted 2006-06-07 12:35 PM


"Headless
of desire"


Intriguing write!!
Enjoyed.

JL



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Gaia
3 posted 2006-06-07 12:43 PM



the cache yields

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-06-09 12:34 PM


LIke this...James
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-06-09 09:23 PM



It's always worthy
to find your roots
again...




Nightshade
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just out of reach
6 posted 2006-06-09 10:54 PM


interesting as usual Dave.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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7 posted 2006-06-15 11:43 AM


I Love It

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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