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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-06-06 02:23 PM


Kismet or kiss or hiss

me

in emotion that transcends initial shallow picturasche

gone

images

that were once words that travelled with nothing but image between consenting beings

traversing beyond boundaries

that smiled


© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-06-06 04:01 PM



enjoyed the imagery

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-06-06 04:08 PM


Midnight

Dave

Honeybee
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3 posted 2006-06-06 08:20 PM



Wow - this is a unique stance to the idea of 'kismet' - soulmates.....The imagery and tone is fabulous, this is one of your best

Melissa~

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-06-06 08:32 PM




A beautiful poem for one of my favourite words!
Love this Dave!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

JL
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5 posted 2006-06-07 12:41 PM


I agree, an excellent write.

JL


Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2006-06-07 02:29 PM


traversing beyond boundaries that smiled..

Sometimes crossing the line is just too enticing!  Lovely poem, Dave!  

~K

froggy
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7 posted 2006-06-15 11:37 AM


A beautiful piece and a keeper as they always are.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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