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Open Poetry #38

Rivers of pain

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-06-03 11:15 PM

When I walked into you life
The whirl wind started
Right before our eyes.

Five years we went from
Straight on the right track
To lost in this rutt
Trying to find our way back.

With every slice of hurtful words
We can never take back
We tear down loves foundation.

And replace it with
Mountains of heart ache
And rivers of pain.

We have only ourself's
To Blame...

Debo

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

1 posted 2006-06-03 11:45 PM

i can relate to this...and its very true ..thanks for the insightful poem

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

2 posted 2006-06-03 11:48 PM

"To lost in this rutt
Trying to find our way back."

I've been there.

Good write,

Will

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

3 posted 2006-06-04 04:33 AM

Sigh.... so true....

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-06-04 03:01 PM

Thanks to all of you for your understanding
In the end I think what hurts the most is there is no one else to blame but he and I.
Love can be such a wonderful heart wrenching thing.

Debo

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