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Kimberly ann
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-06-02 11:53 PM

We all have difficult paths to take in our lives. As you are riding in some areas there are going to be rocky and some will be smooth. Or you have to go up this huge hill. As you go on your legs are getting tired and you just wanna quit, but you can’t. Your legs are tight and hurt like a broken heart, but even though it may hurt you have to keep moving on. No matter what you do your legs are just eating you up inside. The scenery is beautiful but what if the beautiful scenery is thirsty for love, hope and not to be hurt. It’s so burnt down that it’s hard to carry on looking so beautiful. The path is rocky and it is hard to ride over but you figure out some way around it and get out of it. So you come to a smooth surface and it’s easier and your legs loosen a bit but are still in pain. You may just want to give up through half way but you can’t stop life. Hard times are gonna come and may hurt and keep hurting but there is some way out or around of it. You’ve got so many paths to choose from. Do you take the easy one with only a little fun, or take the one that has pain in it that you learn from with adventure and fun, or the all fun one but in the end you loose everything, or do you take the all easy way out and screw up your life completely? Paths are hard to choose and I will always be on a path good or bad, and even though I have aches and pains I will keep moving on.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-06-03 08:22 PM

Welcome to Passions.
You have a good message in your first post.
I found it a bit hard to read, and encourage you to try a format that shortens the sentences a bit. Hope you find that it helps you to get your message to the readers here.
Nice to write with you.
TD

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-06-04 09:48 AM

Yes, we all have those paths to take and hopefully they lead us to where we wish to go.

M

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2006-06-04 01:16 PM

Agreeing with both of the ladies. Welcome
to Passions...a place to share, learn and
grow as a poet and a person.

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