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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2006-06-04 11:15 AM




US… NO MORE


It wasn’t love what was lacking
It wasn’t others involved
It was the distance
That ended
Us

Us
No more
Now I realise
That sometimes love
Isn’t enough to beat the system

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Magnus
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1 posted 2006-06-04 11:29 AM


Excellent point you have made, yes indeed.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-06-04 12:12 PM



But you are both the better
for having tried...

welcome home, Neeraja...


linkin16
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 26
Wales,UK
3 posted 2006-06-04 12:25 PM



totally understood..and nicely layed out..

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
4 posted 2006-06-04 12:43 PM


Yes we are Sunshine... and we have so many loving memories...

Thanks for this warm welcome....


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