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BROTHER JOHN
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0 posted 2006-05-27 04:02 PM


Your constructive comments are gifts to me.

The Home In La Farge

A beautiful home built in far La Farge
Attracted many with its special sign:
For Sale By Owner."Yes, to own as mine
And there dine each night with my sweetest Marge!"
Enquired uncounted ones as to this large
Home of rare beauty with ornate design
And lovely landscape.This home seemed a shrine
Which rested quietly in far La Farge.

"This home's not selling! By divine decree
It then belongs to me and I'll prevail
In owning this site with its master key!"

On its front porch I promptly turned plumb pale
As its gray-headed owner and trustee
Said softly, "Sir, it's the sign that's for sale."


© Copyright 2006 BROTHER JOHN - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-05-27 05:00 PM


BJ~
Well, this sweet ~*Marge*~ LOVES IT !!

Gave me a soft-hearted chuckle, you did~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-05-27 06:36 PM


BROTHER JOHN
Dreams are like bubbles.

StevenS
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3 posted 2006-05-27 08:29 PM


Smiling Brother John! :-)
BROTHER JOHN
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4 posted 2006-05-27 10:09 PM


Dear Marge,

Thanks for reading this and your comments.

O if I just could paint with words as you!

BJ


BROTHER JOHN
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5 posted 2006-05-27 10:13 PM




Dear Seymour,

I guess you are referring to the poem you wrote in which you referred to "driving a bubble."  lol

Thanks for your reading this.


BROTHER JOHN
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6 posted 2006-05-27 10:14 PM


Dear Steven,

Thanks for stopping by and reading this. I enjoy your writings.  BJ

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