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picturegramic
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0 posted 2006-05-25 12:18 PM


When a daughter becomes a bride


When my daughter becomes a bride

I feel
not wanting to let go of a daughter
that is already gone

I feel
a pinch of jealousy to a man
that has become the love of her life

I feel
love of a womanand understand
the love of a man

I feel
a lump in my throat
and love in the air

I feel
the tears of sweet surrender
watering smiles

when a mother remembers
her own.



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1 posted 2006-05-25 12:23 PM


beautifully expressed....
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2 posted 2006-05-25 12:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-05-25 12:59 PM


hugs to you!
my daughter just moved away
to live and work
with her first love...horses
the white Lipizzaners
and I miss her

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