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0 posted 2006-05-24 07:36 PM




LUCIFER

Lucifer,
I know you well;
one more step toward him
meant giving up yourself,

but we are raindrops
not the rain,
feathers
not the wing:

and while others cleave to him
it is ourselves to whom we cling.

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1 posted 2006-05-24 07:40 PM



This could be perceived as a semi-controversial write BUT I appreciate it nonetheless - powerful, thought-provoking writing, I like how you see things from a different standpoint.
Yet again, you've penned a poem that says SO much in fewer words - that's talent and far more powerful!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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2 posted 2006-05-24 10:37 PM


Nicely done, a pleasure to read.
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3 posted 2006-05-24 11:01 PM


well done!
  

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4 posted 2006-05-25 01:45 PM


excellent write !
LOL  That which lies beneath the Covering Cherub...tosses in its sleep...kicking off the covers.  But...in spite of the occasional nightmare...There is a great fondness for the dreaming.  So... That which lies beneath...pulls the cover back over his head and says... Leave "me" alone.

::smiles::   ALL is glorious   :: bows ::

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